無憂保職場(chǎng)指南早報(bào)：Excess Baggage 累贅語法

今日導(dǎo)讀：中國(guó)英語學(xué)習(xí)者在表示時(shí)往往不是不會(huì)說，而是容易犯一些畫蛇添足式的錯(cuò)誤?？纯匆韵洛e(cuò)誤是否也經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)在你的口語中？

問題１：Coming and Going

Examples:1.我?guī)闳セ疖囌?/p>

Wrong： I will bring you to go to the station.

Right：I will bring you to the station.

2．他是坐火車到這兒來的。

Wrong： He took the train to come here.

Right：He took the train here.

Analysis:

在上述錯(cuò)誤的表達(dá)中，;to go;和;to come;是不必要的，而且在語法上也是不正確的，因?yàn)?go;和;come;所表達(dá)的意思已經(jīng)分別包含在;bring;和;take;里面了，無需再重復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào)和說明。像這類表達(dá)去向的語意被包含在其他動(dòng)詞當(dāng)中的想法是十分普遍的，在表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)加以注意。更多的例子：

Right：I am accompanying my friend to the opera.

Wrong：I am accompanying my friend to go the opera.

Right：My uncle brought me here in his car.

Wrong：My uncle brought me to come here in his car.

問題2：Too Many Conjunctions

中國(guó)人在使用英語進(jìn)行表達(dá)時(shí)，尤其在寫作方面，似乎對(duì);and;和;but;這兩個(gè)詞情有獨(dú)鐘，使用地非常頻繁。 更糟糕的是，還經(jīng)常用這個(gè)詞來開啟一個(gè)句子。所以，在這里有兩點(diǎn)要特別注意：

首先，用;and;和;but;來啟示一個(gè)句子被認(rèn)為是一種糟糕的用法。當(dāng)然，在非正式文體中是可以的，在小說中也可以，不過在一般情況下最好還是避免使用。 在開啟一句話是，你可以用;also;或;in addition;來代替;and;；用;however;來替代;but;。

Examples:

Bad: I think Disneyland is too far away. And it;and;和;but;等連詞，具有語意連貫性的句子之間的那種連貫性通常是不言而喻的，不必特別進(jìn)行說明。你所要做的就是把主語明確地表達(dá)出來。

Examples：

Right：Mary is a painter and really enjoys other peoples art too. She often goes to art galleries. However, she has never had enough money to travel to Paris to see the Louvre.

Wrong：Mary is a painter and really enjoys other peoples art too. And she often goes to art galleries. But she has never had enough money to travel to Paris to see the Louvre.

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